Feature Writer: thegreat_pretender
Feature Title: LAIR OF THE SUCCUBUS
Published: 20.10.2023
Story Codes: Erotic Horror
Synopsis: A bounty hunter takes on the world’s most powerful succubus
Lair Of The Succubus
Sir Valis Donnelly had been a bounty hunter for the Kingdom of Norr for over 10 years. A sharp-witted, agile warrior taught by the best mentor in the land, Valis had gained a reputation for his specialty in fighting the unnatural forces that forced their way into the world of the living, specifically demons. He spent his career slaying succubi and rescuing entire cities from their thrall with the greatest of ease, never falling victim to their charms.
It was for this that he caught the eye of Norr’s King, who requested an audience with Valis one summer morning while the royal court was in session. Not one to turn down his King, Valis appeared, and was pleased to find that the King wanted to offer him a higher position within his court.
Just as they were discussing the terms, the King’s assistant interrupted the session, seemingly in distress.
“Sire, I apologize for disrupting the court, but someone has approached the capital with an emergency that needs your attention.”
The King at first glared at his assistant, but softened when he saw a young woman appear behind him, looking frazzled and terrified.
“I will forgive the interruption for now. Please approach the court, madam.”
The woman stepped forward, shaking as she approached the King.
“My name is Jane and I hail from Prine, your Highness. We are a small but mighty town located in the southern region. Over the past month our people have been… disappearing. Men and women alike have seemingly vanished into thin air. When this started, we had a population of 120. As of now, there are only 53 of us left.”
Sir Valis saw his opportunity and stepped in.
“Sire, if what she says is true, this sounds like a demon who is already well into her feeding cycle. If we don’t stop her soon, she could grow strong enough to spread to other towns.”
“And what do you propose we do, Sir Valis?”
“Send me to Prine. I will personally snuff out this demon and return peace to the land of Norr.”
The King thought for a moment, running a hand through his beard as he looked from the young woman seeking help back to the bounty hunter before him.
“I trust your judgement, Sir Valis. This will be your test. You will ride for Prine at dusk, eradicate this demon and return to the Capital as soon as it is done. I grant you two weeks to accomplish your task. If you can manage this, I will grant you a position in my court.”
Valis couldn’t believe his luck.
“Thank you, Sire. It will be done much faster than that. You will be pleased with my efficiency,” Valis replied, proudly boasting of his skillset before the grand leader of the Kingdom, who gave him a nod before dismissing the court.
This would be a breeze. A perfect opportunity to impress the King and further his status as the best bounty hunter in the land. Not only that, but he would earn a court position, which came with property within the Capital, Lordship over a region of his choosing, and endless wealth.
***
It took several days by horseback to reach the town of Prine, but as he rode under the archway that marked the town’s border, Sir Valis felt the hairs on his arms rise up and a tingling spread throughout his body. Taking a deep breath, he stopped his horse and closed his eyes, grounding himself until the sensations faded.
Once he regained control, the bounty hunter couldn’t help but smile to himself. This was perfect. A real challenge to prove his worth to the King. They would sing his name for centuries to come for defeating such a demon.
Valis met with the town’s leadership, who showed him to his temporary quarters. A small room in the back of the local church. It wasn’t much, but he wouldn’t be there for long, so it would do.
The church’s Priest, Jeremy, met with Valis to provide some more information on the disappearances.
“We’ve narrowed down the location to a cavern on the outskirts of town. Mary, a member of our clergy, told me her husband rose out of bed one night and wandered out of the house, seemingly entranced. She followed him to the entrance of the cave and called out to him, but he just walked in like a zombie without responding. She says he never came back out.”
“It sounds like we’re dealing with a succubus here, Father. I felt her presence when I crossed into town. The power she’s exuding is strong, but you have nothing to worry about. I’ve faced tougher foes and I always come out on top.”
“I hope you’ve come prepared, Sir Valis… this entity took the highest member of our church last night. The most devout man I have ever met.”
Valis knew that words wouldn’t provide any further comfort, so instead, he removed a bag hanging from his shoulder and lay it out on the table before them, revealing an array of weapons and monster-hunting trinkets. A dagger enchanted with holy water, rope, a cross, a pistol, and a torch.
“The best way to send a succubus back to hell is to immobilize them and remove their heart. It’s not a job for the weak, which is why so many fall for their charms. The weapon used to remove the heart must be enchanted with holy water or it will not pierce their skin. The King has sent the right man for this job, Father. She won’t live to take another soul from this town ever again.”
Father Jeremy seemed pleased with this answer, and Valis left the church to seek out the town’s blacksmith. He needed his dagger fully sharpened for the moment he plunged it into the heart of the demon.
***
When night fell, Valis led Father Jeremy to a position at the entrance of the cavern, kneeling behind some brush nearby. The two waited, and sure enough, after only an hour, a man suddenly appeared on the roadway, walking towards the cavern as if he were asleep. As he drew nearer, Valis noted that the man had a throbbing erection poking through his pants, almost as if it were leading him in the right direction.
At the best moment, Valis jumped out of the brush and grabbed the man by his shoulders, wrestling him to the ground.
“Toss me the rope in my bag, Father!” Valis ordered as he struggled to hold the man down. After catching it, he tied the man’s arms and legs tight, immobilizing him. “Take him to the church and make sure he has someone to watch him until dawn. I’m going in.”
“Please return to us alive, Sir Valis!” he heard Father Jeremy call out behind him. Valis smiled to himself. The townspeople truly didn’t know that they were dealing with the best hunter in the land. He couldn’t wait to deliver the demon’s heart to his King and earn the riches he deserved.
***
The light of his torch flickered as Valis went deeper and deeper into the mysterious cavern, the cross tied around his neck bouncing on his chest with every step. At first, it seemed endless. With multiple pathways to choose from, he would hold out his arms in both directions and follow the direction of whichever arm tingled and developed goosebumps, reflecting the power within.
Other than that, there didn’t seem to be any other signs that there was a demon within the cave. Until Valis rounded a corner and found something that shocked even him.
The walls of the cave ahead were translucent, with openings that looked like alien pods inserted along the pathway, enclosed by a glass barrier. As he neared the first pod, he realized that there was a body inside.
It was a man, completely naked, pressed up against the glass. The scariest part wasn’t the presence of the body at all. Rather, it was the expression on his face.
The man looked as if he had died experiencing true bliss, his eyes rolled up into the back of his head and a smile spread across his features. Valis couldn’t remember a time when he’d seen a man so happy. Especially a dead one. And as he continued down the corridor, he realized that there were more people like this. Men and women alike, all caught in a final moment of ecstasy, their bodies pale from the life being drained out of them.
Valis had never seen this many victims in one place. Usually, a succubus was capable of killing a few people before either being stopped or fleeing into hiding. This demon seemed to be proud of her work, wanting to display it to the world.
Grasping the cross around his neck as he walked, Valis felt its holy power flow through him, giving him the strength to continue on. But as he walked further and further past the never-ending pods of victims, he encountered a strange mist. It was subtle at first, but it soon surrounded him, entering his nose and mouth.
Valis gasped as he inhaled the mist, feeling it spread through him. It smelled like the most beautiful bouquet of roses. It reminded him of…
Love.
His eyes widened as he realized that was exactly what it felt like. The mist wrapped around him like a warm hug. It felt like soft lips kissing his skin, warm hands massaging his shoulders, the softness of a woman pressing against his back, whispering promises of pleasure and ecstasy.
The voice told him he was walking towards his destiny. His reason for existing. Fulfilling his purpose in the world. He tried to shake it out of his head, but the mist was everywhere. Despite himself, he realized he was breathing in even deeper to get more of the feeling in his heart. It reminded him of how it felt to fall in love for the first time. Surrendering to humanity’s craving to be loved.
Soon enough, Valis couldn’t see ahead of him, too enclosed by the mist. He put his arms out to feel his way forward, struggling to keep his mind clear. As his body reacted, his cock grew rock hard and strained against his pants. If this was how strong the demon’s power was before he even encountered her, what would it be like to see her in the flesh?
He was about to find out.
***
After struggling through the mist for what felt like forever, Valis had to stop. He felt his way along until he reached one side of the cavern wall and collapsed against it, trying to cough the mist out of his lungs. He closed his eyes and remembered his training, all that he’d learned about the mental manipulation of succubi.
“You don’t need to struggle anymore, my love. You’ve found me…”
Valis’ eyes shot open in shock, realizing that the mist had cleared and the voice he’d been hearing was no longer in his head. It was nearby.
That wasn’t the worst part.
As he looked up, he realized he was pressed up against the glass of one of the pods. This one, like the others, had a body in it, but as his vision cleared, he recognized the man inside.
It was an exact copy of himself.
His blood turned cold as he took in his own features, now locked forever in the same bliss as the other bodies he’d passed.
It couldn’t be real.
“Of course it isn’t really you, silly. But you want it to be… don’t you?”
He couldn’t ignore her presence any longer. Taking a deep breath, Valis turned towards the location of the voice.
He found himself gazing into a large opening in the cavern the size of a grand ballroom, so expansive that he couldn’t see how high up it went or where it ended. The entire room was bathed in red light, shining down on a path of stairs that led up to a natural rock formation perfectly sculpted in the center of everything. And at the apex, atop a throne made from pure gold, sat the most beautiful woman who had ever stepped foot on Earth.
The first thought that came to mind about her body was how absurdly perfect it looked. She wore a sheer bodysuit that highlighted every last curve, showcasing an hourglass figure and thighs that would make any man drool with lust. Her body was covered in runic designs that traced all along her tanned skin, pulsing with light. Her breasts were on full display for his hungry eyes thanks to her outfit, and they had the most beautiful natural lift he had ever seen, as if designed for his hands to fit right over them.
Her face, like her perfect body, was built to seduce and destroy. With full, inviting lips and big brown eyes that called to him with the promise of the deepest love and pleasure he could ever experience. Her hair was something to adore, long brown locks highlighted with a deep purple on the bottom, flowing down and framing her like a painting.
Atop her luscious hair were two jet-black horns, glistening in the moonlight that flowed into her lair. He could also make out the shadow of wings curled behind her back reflecting from her throne. Most succubi made an attempt to hide their obviously demonic features to better lure in their victims, but this one seemed to flaunt hers instead, as if she knew she was powerful enough to make men and women alike fall before her even with the knowledge that it would bring about their doom.
Valis had encountered hundreds of succubi throughout his career, but in that moment, it struck him that this might be his most powerful foe yet.
He didn’t realize he was staring, mouth agape until he felt drool dripping down his chin.
“Well, you aren’t who I thought would be coming tonight, but I have to admit, you are much better prey…” the succubus cooed, her voice sounding even better now that he could watch the words fall from her perfect lips.
Prey…
That word snapped him out of her thrall.
“Demon, your time here on Earth has come to an end. I have come to vanquish you back to hell where you belong,” Valis spoke proudly, hoping to strike fear and show his experience defeating foes like her.
The succubus simply laughed, looking down at him from her throne as she crossed one leg over the other, enticing his eyes to take in her glorious legs that looked as if they were carved by the Gods.
“Silly boy, you didn’t come here for that. Maybe at first… but not anymore.”
His mental strength wavered as she locked her eyes onto him, letting him feel only a small taste of the power she held within. A mere appetizer that would make him crave dessert.
“You came here because you were following the path towards your true purpose.”
With her eyes still locked on his, she slowly stood up from her throne, letting him take in her incredible form from a standing position. Before he could interrupt her, she began walking down the stairs that separated the two of them.
“You’ve known all your life that you were meant for more. All of that submissive energy has been burning inside of you for so long… you pretend to be an Alpha, a hunter of demons, but we both know how deeply you’ve buried your true desires.”
She was drawing closer to him, but he couldn’t move, trapped within her enchanting gaze.
“I know who you are, Sir Valis, and though you hide behind a name with power, you have none. You are a Beta, my sweet boy… and I will be the one to help you accept that.”
Valis couldn’t wait a second longer. In record time, he pulled his gun from the side holster and took a shot at her before diving behind a nearby rock to prepare for her counter-attack. As predicted from that distance, it missed, meant more to distract and initiate a fight rather than to kill.
He waited against the rock for her response. Normally, a succubus would have already returned the attack and hurled a ball of flames at him, or physically ripped him out from his hiding place. But in this moment, from her, came nothing.
Until she started giggling.
Her giggles were so playful and sweet that their sound hit him right in the heart. It didn’t help that his lungs were still filled with the mist, making him question his every move.
He almost felt ashamed for trying to hurt someone so beautiful.
“I’m not going to hurt you, baby boy. And you’re not going to hurt me. To do so would be against your nature.”
It sounded like her voice was right next to him now. In his confusion, as she ramped up her pheromones, he found himself thinking that she might be right. But only for a split second.
“DIE, DEMON!” Valis yelled at the top of his lungs as he hurled himself over the rock, dagger at the ready to plunge it into her heart.
To his surprise, he found that she wasn’t anywhere near him. In fact, she was still standing in the middle of the stairs, the same spot she’d been in when he launched his first attack.
And his erection began to throb when he saw what she was doing.
She’d started at her hips, sliding her hands up and down the curves he recognized as absurdly perfect. There was something about the way she touched her body that made her even more alluring. Especially when she moved her hands up to cup her breasts, squeezing them in a way that made him want to run up those stairs and close the distance between them.
“That’s a good boy… you wouldn’t want to hurt me, would you? Why destroy such a perfect being?”
He almost fell for her words, but the cross around his neck began to glow, clearing his mind. The seductive smile on her face never receded, but her eyes dipped down to his neck and took in what was preventing his full submission.
“Such a pretty little trinket. You came prepared, Sir Valis. But that’s ok. I can work with this.”
The succubus lifted an arm towards him, and Valis found himself suddenly rising into the air, his body floating with the incline of her finger. The cross floated above him, as if trying to escape the demonic magic. With a grin, she then jerked her arm to the right, and Valis flew threw the air, hurtling straight towards a jagged rock that could easily pierce through him.
He shut his eyes and prepared for the worst… only to suddenly stop in midair, inches away from the sharp rock point. He then felt himself being turned upside down, continuing to float as he looked down and saw how far he was from the ground. A fall from this height would be deadly.
But as the succubus unfurled her wings and glided towards him, it became clear that she had no intention of dropping him. Instead, she flew right up to him, coming to a stop with her face inches away from his own.
It was here that he could truly take in the intricate details of her beauty. She had small freckles peppered across her face, only serving to enhance the otherworldly beauty emanating from her features. As she smiled at him, he saw how jagged and sharp her teeth were, primed to kill but so perfectly chiseled that they were a thing of beauty to behold.
And that sweet smile melted the resistance in his heart.
The succubus knew that she couldn’t remove the cross on her own. To touch it would burn her flesh. Instead, she had other means of taking care of it.
“I don’t believe we’ve been properly introduced. I know your name, but you should of course learn mine. After all, you’re going to be screaming it for everyone outside to hear.”
She raised a hand to gently caress his cheek, and it took all of his training and will not to lean into her warm, soft embrace.
“My name is Mommy Flora, and I will be your new God, darling. Under my care, you will renounce the false Gods you once worshiped and recognize me as your true ruler. The only one in this world deserving of your submission.”
He searched his thoughts, desperately trying to recall if his training had touched on a succubus of this kind, but he came up empty. Mostly because his eyes had locked onto hers again. The world around him washed away as he found himself staring into two deep brown pools, making his entire body light up with sensation.
It was getting harder and harder to think.
“It can be hard to face reality and admit the truth, my love. I understand entirely. That’s why I’m here to guide you through this. The path to salvation under my rule requires great sacrifice, but at the end lies the greatest pleasure you could ever imagine…”
Her thumb moved away from his cheek and crept inward, brushing across his lips. She pressed it deeper until it slipped into his mouth. Without thinking, still gazing into her hypnotic eyes, Valis began to suck on it, licking the soft skin with his tongue. An involuntary moan escaped him as he covered it in his spit.
When Mommy Flora pulled her thumb out, a line of saliva followed until she brought it to her own lips and sucked, making a display for him to watch with wide, lustful eyes.
“I’d love to play with you some more. To show you how good my love really feels. But that little necklace of yours is getting in the way of our fun… why don’t you take it off so I can make you feel really good?”
In his current state, it sounded like the best idea anyone had ever had. Why would he want anything to come between him and her perfect body? He reached up to his neck with one hand, towards the clasp binding him to the cross. Mommy Flora’s smile widened, her sharp teeth shining in the moonlight as she licked her lips, ready to go even deeper inside his mind.
The distraction worked. With his other hand, Valis whipped out his pistol and fired. The shot hit her in the chest and it was enough force for her to let go, sending him plunging towards the ground.
Once again, just before he hit the ground, Mommy Flora swung her arm and Valis instead flew to the right. He shielded himself by rolling into a ball and hit the ground with less force, stumbling away from her grasp.
Not giving her a chance to react, Valis ran, heading towards a darker part of the cavern. He found a boulder and took cover behind it, catching his breath and letting his mind clear. The skin on his cheek where she’d touched him tingled with her lingering love, and he found himself battling guilt for shooting at her again. She was right about one thing, even trying to harm her stunning hourglass body felt like a crime against nature.
He watched from the corner of the boulder as Mommy Flora dropped back down to her throne, sighing as she looked around for him. He didn’t know if she truly couldn’t see him, or if she was playing the waiting game. One thing was for sure, her skin had absorbed the bullet as if it were nothing, instantly healing itself.
Despite the distance, her voice echoed throughout the cavern and reached his hiding spot with ease.
“Such a silly boy to fight what you know deep down is your calling. Listen to your body, my sweet Valis. You know what it wants.”
She was right. The more she spoke, the more his body shook with need. He could feel her in his blood, flowing through his body as if his heart pumped only for her. His cock strained to escape his pants, pleading for him to return to her warm embrace.
Her voice was drawing nearer now.
“I know baby, you don’t want to resist this anymore. It’s so much harder to fight than it is to surrender and fall for me. You’ve resisted true pleasure all your life as you’ve killed my sisters, Valis, but it’s time to give in. I know you’re wondering how good the people out there felt in their final moments.”
His memory flashed back to the bodies he’d seen on his way in, how happy they looked. How fulfilled they must have felt as they surrendered to the bliss of Mommy Flora.
“You could feel that way, too. It’s the deepest ecstasy any human being could possibly experience. All you have to do is take off your necklace and I’ll make you feel better than you’ve ever felt.”
Her voice was even closer now. It was time to strike.
He pulled out his dagger again and leapt out from behind the rock, ready to strike.
And then he saw her.
She’d removed her body suit, her figure now on full display.
And she was even more perfect than he could ever have imagined.
His arm was still raised, the dagger clutched tightly in hand, but his body had completely frozen as his eyes wandered over her naked breasts, down to her shapely hips, and even lower to her exposed pussy, which he knew had taken the lives of so many, but at that moment, he didn’t care.
“Drop your weapons.”
The dagger fell from his hand and he removed his holster, letting the pistol drop to the ground.
“Remove your necklace, baby boy.”
Without a second thought, he raised his arms and unclasped the necklace, throwing it to the side, earning a giggle from the object of his affection.
“Such a good boy… now drop to your knees and come to your new God.”
Valis couldn’t think about anything other than her. It was as if nothing else existed in the world.
He dropped to his knees, as commanded, and crawled to her, his heart hammering with every inch closer towards the flawless woman before him. When he was close enough, she held out her hand to stop him, instead extending a leg out towards him until her foot was inches away from his face.
“Show me your devotion…”
He didn’t hesitate, reaching out and taking hold of her foot so he could pull it close and start kissing it. He’d never cared for feet before, finding them to be disgusting. But for her, he would do anything. Every part of her was beautiful.
He licked from the bottom of her sole up to her toes, taking each one in his mouth. Mommy Flora giggled as he surrendered, kissing up her thigh and moaning into it like a lost puppy. She took hold of his hair and pulled him back, forcing him to look up at her, throbbing through his pants.
“I knew you wouldn’t fight my love… no one can. You knew that from the start. You felt my power, but it didn’t stop you from finding me. You wanted this all along, and now you’re going to have it.”
With that, she pushed him down until he was fully on his back and slowly lowered herself down until her dripping pussy was inches away from his face. Valis strained to reach her with his tongue, yearning for a taste.
“Beg for it.”
“Please, Mommy Flora, let me taste you. I beg of you. Let me discover the joys of worshiping your perfection. Let me…”
Valis paused, suddenly noticing something out of the corner of his eye. He turned to the right and saw, in the distance, the cross he had thrown, glistening and reminding him of his vow to protect and serve the Kingdom. His mind became a battlefield between wanting to give in and struggling to clear through the mist to think rational thoughts of survival.
Mommy Flora looked down at him, recognizing his hesitation.
“You have the promise of pure bliss at your fingertips, my love, and yet…” she reached down to run her fingers through his hair, “…you still resist me.”
Valis felt empowered by her statement. She could sense that he still hadn’t given in, despite how badly his body begged him to.
“I’m not like my sisters, darling. If it’s not full and complete submission for me and my power, I just don’t want it.”
She stood up and backed away. Valis had to force his mouth shut to keep from begging her to return to him.
“You will submit to me, Sir Valis Donnelly. It may not be tonight, but when you finally do, you will experience the greatest pleasure of your life. You will give yourself over to Mommy Flora, willingly and without ever looking back. And do you know why?”
He gazed into her eyes, struggling to fight against the lust swirling through his brain and the tingling shooting through his body.
“Because I am inevitable…”
***
The next thing Valis knew, he was laying on the ground at the entrance of the cavern, fatigue taking over his entire body. He struggled to sit up, just as Father Jeremy came running down the hill ahead.
“Sir Valis! Were you successful in your mission?”
He couldn’t believe what had just happened. Never in all his years had he faced such a powerful foe. More than that, an opponent who won and let him live. He needed to stall for time.
“I couldn’t find her, Father. I searched all night with no luck. I’ll try again at dusk…”
***
Father Jeremy helped him get back to his quarters, finding solace in the warmth of his new bed. While his body begged for sleep, he wouldn’t allow it, instead pouring through every book he’d brought along for any answers on how to defeat Mommy Flora.
“She let me live…” he muttered to himself as he searched. “I was right where she wanted me, defeated, and she let me live…”
His hands began to slow down as he flipped through the pages at a slower pace, finding it hard to even read the words on the pages. All he could think about was her body. The way her skin glistened in the moonlight, accentuating every curve.
She’d taken such good care of him. Saving him from falling.
And she could see the urges he kept hidden deep within his soul. The urge to…
Submit.
“Enough!” Valis roared, throwing the book against the wall. He was the Kingdom’s finest bounty hunter, a warrior who couldn’t be stopped. He’d defeated minotaurs, goblin queens, sirens, lamias, and so many others. He wouldn’t be tamed by a mere succubus.
Then why couldn’t he stop thinking about her?
Suddenly, a searing pain emanated from his thigh and he dropped to the ground, putting a hand over his mouth to keep from screaming. It felt as if someone was dragging a knife through his flesh.
As the pain continued, Valis ripped open his pant leg. Words were being carved into his skin, blood-red letters appearing before his very eyes.
As the last letter of the first word appeared, he could barely make it out through tear-filled eyes.
*Obedience*
There was no time to breathe a sigh of relief, as yet another word was etched into him.
*Is*
The next section was even worse, and Valis found it impossible to keep his screams isolated. He dropped his hand and let his cries of pain fill the church. When the pain finally passed and he caught his breath, he lifted his head and looked down to read the final word.
*Love*
The full message washed over him and he felt the pain numb as he repeated it over and over again in his head, hearing it first in his own voice, then in Mommy Flora’s.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
The more he repeated it, the better he felt. It was like discovering the secret to life. Finding what you were meant for. Your purpose. It made so much sense.
The pain he’d experienced was replaced with a deeply pleasurable sensation, rewarding him for repeating her message. He would repeat it again and again, as long as he could keep feeling this way. Connected to her in every way.
“SIR VALIS! Is everything all right?” Father Jeremy called through the door, rushing to respond to the noise. Valis snapped out of his stupor, grateful he’d locked the door.
“I’m fine! Just a nightmare, I apologize for disturbing you, Father,” he replied, hoping the Priest would believe him.
“Ah, I understand. Nasty things, those nightmares. Just holler if you need anything!” Father Jeremy said before Valis heard his footsteps retreating.
Just as he was left alone, the pain returned to his leg, searing across each letter and spreading through his entire body this time. Valis bit down on his fist and suppressed another scream. As it worsened yet again, he repeated what worked before.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
The pain lessened each time he repeated the phrase until it faded completely once again, replaced by the pleasure he was becoming all too familiar with.
Mommy Flora was conditioning him, he realized, to associate obedience with pleasure and resistance with pain. She may have spared him, but he felt himself slowly becoming bound to her, her sweet words swirling through his mind like a symphony.
“Listen to your body, you know what it needs.”
“You were born to worship me.”
“It’s all for Mommy.”
“Fuck it,” Valis growled to himself, getting up off the floor and limping over to the bed that had been prepared for him. He let himself fall into it, breathing a sigh of relief as the softness comforted him. The fur felt almost as soft as Mommy Flora’s skin. The way it had yielded to his touch as he knelt before her, running his hands up and down her thighs, looking up into her swirling…
“I just need to sleep,” he said, shaking the thoughts from his mind. He lay back against his pillow and closed his eyes, hoping to escape her grasp in his dreams.
***
Valis found himself standing at the entrance to the Prine Church, watching as a service was being held. The pews were full with parishioners, listening intently as Father Jeremy gave his sermon. As he rambled on about the Gods and sin, Valis couldn’t help but laugh to himself.
“Fools, don’t they know they’re worshiping the wrong Gods? The true savior of humanity lives underground. The Goddess of Norr, Mommy Flora,” he exclaimed proudly, the words flowing out so effortlessly.
In a flash, everyone in the church faded away into a cloud of ash. When it cleared, they were gone, but the church wasn’t empty.
Mommy Flora now stood on the pulpit, completely naked, looking down at Valis with a pleased look on her face.
“Such a good boy, Sir Valis. Approach and tell me more…”
Valis felt compelled to obey. After all, his Goddess had given him a permanent reminder of the motto that would run through his head for all of eternity.
Obedience is love.
“My submission yearned to be free the second my eyes first took in the glory of my new God. I knew I had to bow before you. To build an Altar and pray to achieve salvation under your leadership,” Valis continued, speaking more of his truth as he drew closer and closer to his Queen. Mommy Flora giggled in response, pleased by his statement.
“You will never want to pray the sin away, sweet boy, because as long as I am your religion, sinning is your ecstasy…” she exclaimed, stepping down to close the gap between them. Valis felt his cock throb as she reached out and took his face in her hands.
“My devotion to you runs as deep as the core of the Earth. I am yours, forever entranced by the privilege of worshiping you,” he continued, letting his hands fall to her hips, feeling the soft, warm flesh melt into his fingertips.
Mommy Flora bit her lip and moaned, feeling her power grow from the profession of his new gospel. She leaned in, her face now inches away from his own.
“I knew you couldn’t resist me. Seal your fate, my love. Give yourself to me completely.”
Valis obeyed the orders of his Queen, leaning in to close the gap between them. Her lips tasted sweet, like pure honey, and he found himself lost in her embrace, clutching her hips even tighter. Submission raced through him as her saliva-coated tongue entered his mouth, exploring her new thrall as his eyes rolled into the back of his head.
Just like the vision of himself he’d seen in the pod within her cave.
When she pulled back, he leaned in to reconnect their lips but she took hold of his throat and stopped him. She then moved her hand to his chest and forced him down onto his knees. She raised her leg up onto one of the pews, grabbing him by the back of his head and forcing him into her honeypot.
Just as he extended his tongue to taste her…
***
Valis sat up in bed with a deep, heaving breath, his face and body covered in sweat. The dream felt so real. His lips still tingled from the softness of her kiss.
It wasn’t enough. He needed more.
It was then that Valis knew what he must do.
***
As he limped his way through town, Valis encountered Father Jeremy, standing beside Jane, the young woman who had first approached the King. The Priest turned to him, his face as pale as a ghost.
“Sir Valis, the demon has taken another victim! Jane’s husband walked out of their home half an hour ago and hasn’t returned. Please do something!”
Valis ignored him, brushing past them and continuing on. His leg began to burn again, but he knew how to stop the pain this time.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
Obedience is love.
He continued to repeat the statement out loud as he limped into the cavern, through each of the winding curves, beyond all of the bodies trapped in eternal ecstasy, until he reached Mommy Flora’s lair.
Once inside, he saw her standing by her throne with a man kneeling before her, gazing up into her eyes as she removed her bodysuit so he could take in the glory of her naked body..
She had to be stopped.
But not for the same reason as before.
With all of the strength he could muster, Valis limped his way up the stairs, grabbed the man by his neck, and threw him over the edge of the cliff. The man’s screams echoed throughout the cavern until they faded into obscurity.
He then turned to face the source of his obsession.
“He was not worthy of submitting to you… but I am.”
Mommy Flora watched as Valis fell to his knees, noticing that he hadn’t bothered to bring any weapons this time.
“They would have made me a Lord for delivering your heart to the King,” he exclaimed, “but what is all the wealth in the land worth compared to experiencing the depths of your love?”
The succubus approached her willing victim, reaching down to caress his cheek. Valis leaned into her warmth, feeling his heart beat so fast he thought it might explode.
“That’s what I wanted all along, my love. To feel you reach your full potential without any resistance holding you back,” Mommy Flora said, sliding her hand down to cup his chin and pull his head up to face her.
“Now, open your mouth for me…”
Valis gazed up at her and obeyed as she towered above him. With a grin, Mommy Flora bent over in front of him and let a long strand of saliva slide down her tongue, dangling tantalizingly before his very eyes.
Valis couldn’t believe his luck as he extended his own tongue, waiting patiently until the strand of spit slipped down into his mouth. It burned like acid for a split second before it spread across his tongue and slid down his throat. He closed his eyes and let out a deep moan, savoring the taste of his Queen.
“That’s a good boy… remove your clothes and stay right there,” she commanded before stepping around him, her tail brushing across his chest as she walked. In a flash he tore off his clothing and waited patiently, facing the entrance of the cavern, his cock throbbing as he wondered what she had planned for him next.
“Turn around, Sir Valis. Gaze upon the feast before you.”
Valis turned and his mouth dropped open in awe as he saw Mommy Flora now seated on her golden throne, one leg propped up as she displayed her gorgeous pink pussy for him. She spread her delicate folds apart with two fingers, letting him take it all in.
“Mommy… please…” Valis pleaded, barely able to get the words out in his desperation.
“Please what, sweet boy?”
“Please let me taste you.”
She giggled again, pressing a finger inside of herself before holding it out to him, covered in her dripping nectar.
“Come to me and experience the rewards that come with your submission.”
Valis crawled to her like a man possessed, not wasting a single minute as he reached her and took her finger in his mouth, sucking so hard his cheeks hollowed out.
It was only a small taste, but it was divine.
His mouth and tongue tingled and buzzed, desperate to taste her more. And he wouldn’t need to wait. Mommy Flora took hold of the back of his head with both hands and pulled him down into her folds, letting him feast on the object of his obsession.
“That’s my good boy! Enjoy yourself,” she moaned, grabbing him by his hair and forcing him deeper. Sir Valis gasped for air in between as he drowned in his Queen, her juices coating his chin and dripping onto the cavern floor. With every lick and taste, he wondered why he’d spent so long fighting the succubi of the world. All they wanted to do is make mankind feel the greatest pleasure in the world. Who could possibly resist that?
When he’d had his fill, Mommy Flora gently pulled him back, watching as he gasped for air and licked his lips to savor every last bit of her taste. She looked into his eyes and grinned when she saw how cloudy they looked, completely overtaken by lust and desire.
“Sir Valis?”
“Yes, Mommy Flora?”
“It’s time, baby boy.”
He knew what she meant. It was time to make the ultimate sacrifice for Earth’s rightful ruler. All thoughts of resistance had long since faded. This was the way of the world. Beta’s like him needed a Mommy to keep them in line, to guide them in the right direction.
To take whatever they wanted.
Mommy Flora stood up from her throne and pushed Valis down in her place, his body relaxing back into the seat as his hard cock bobbed in the open air. She savored the moment, feeling the power of making a man of such high-standing in the Kingdom submit to her every whim. There wasn’t an ounce of resistance left in his mind, which only served to turn her on even more.
She climbed on top of her thrall, their naked bodies creating a palette of color as she lowered herself over him. Valis moaned, moving his hips up to try and connect himself to her. Instead, she reached down and pressed him deeper into the throne by his chest, denying him of the prize he so desperately craved.
“Tell me I’m perfect.”
Valis began to shake with need, looking deep into her eyes.
“You are the epitome of perfection. There is no one who could even hold a candle to you, Mommy Flora.”
She wasn’t satisfied.
“Tell me you’re mine.”
“I am yours, it was my destiny all along to fall at your feet. My entire life has led up to my submission for you. I was born to serve you.”
One last test.
“Tell me you love me.”
Valis didn’t hesitate.
“I love you. I love you so fucking much, my perfect Queen. Take me, please, I beg of you. Take my surrender and let it fill you with the power you need to spread your love across the world.”
“Good boy.”
And she dropped onto him.
Valis let out the loudest moan he had ever made as his entire body exploded with sensation and his brain was flooded with pure, white-hot pleasure. He’d bedded other women on his travels throughout the Kingdom, but it was nothing like this. It felt as if a part of his body was being unlocked for the first time, an experience that he knew, in that moment, was to die for.
It felt even better as Mommy Flora began to ride him, rocking her hips and filling herself to the brink with his throbbing, submissive cock. Valis raised his hands to her hips, letting his fingers sink into her soft flesh as he met each and every one of her thrusts.
“Don’t you wish…you’d given in…the moment you saw me?” The demon asked, feeling his submission flow through her as she took him as deep as he could go.
“YES!” Valis cried out in response, his entire being focused on the pleasure coursing through his body, overwhelming his senses.
“Cum for me… sweet boy. Feed my greed for your complete and total submission.”
Once again, Valis obeyed.
His first orgasm inside of the demon was the best and strongest of his entire life. It felt as if his cum would never stop pumping into her, flooding her womb with his cum, his strength, and, as he would soon feel, his very soul. He dropped back against her throne, struggling to catch his breath and settle himself.
“Not enough, baby. Mommy wants more!” She exclaimed as she began to ride him again. Valis was shocked to realize that his cock hadn’t lost an inch of hardness. If anything, it was even harder than before. And his libido was still at an all time high, as if he’d never released at all.
He needed more too.
The sound of their flesh slapping together once again filled the cavern, and Valis grasped her hips to hold on for the ride. Mommy Flora took his hands and pulled them up to her breasts, letting him squeeze them and feel the softness yield to his fingers. It only spurred him on more as he thrust into her even harder, racing towards his next orgasm.
When he reached it, he couldn’t believe yet again how much cum he filled her with. He watched as the runes on her body lit up with every pump, her strength and power growing before his very eyes. Instead of fear, he felt nothing but satisfaction. He was making his Queen happy. Serving his purpose. What better feeling could there be in the world for a Beta like him?
With his second orgasm, he started to notice that his strength was disappearing. His muscles weren’t what they were before he’d entered her lair. His skin was losing its color and his life force felt like it was flowing out of him. As she gained strength, he grew weaker and weaker. Even as he felt himself dying in her arms, he still knew it was the right thing to do. The world deserved to feel her love, and he would give his life to make sure it could.
On his fourth orgasm, he could feel himself withering away. Just when he thought he couldn’t go at it any longer, Mommy Flora stopped, reaching down to take his face in her hands.
“I will not take your life, my sweet Valis”, she cooed, holding up his head as he no longer had the strength to do so. “I promised I would have a greater purpose for you and I meant it. You will lead my army of slaves as we spread my love far beyond this Kingdom, until the world has fallen at the feet of Mommy Flora. I will rule the land of Norr, darling, all because you failed to resist your natural desires. Doesn’t that sound wonderful?”
Valis could only nod, a smile forming across his pale face as he pictured the beautiful things her love would do for the Kingdom.
“Now, watch what you’ve helped to create…”
Mommy Flora’s eyes began to glow as she raised her arms and shot two beams of bright blue light into the sky. Moments later, the sound of glass shattering filled the cavern.
Valis knew exactly what was happening.
He turned his attention to the entrance of the cavern and watched as the men and women who’d been trapped in the pods slowly made their way in, shuffling about like zombies as they answered the call of their Queen. Their faces were still locked in expressions of bliss, the same kind Valis had on his face as his cock continued to throb in the demon’s womb even as she sat still on his lap.
“My babies! What a beautiful sight to see you reach your next stage of evolution!” Mommy Flora said to the crowd of undead worshippers that now filled the cavern. She then turned back to Valis.
“One final orgasm, my love, and you will be ready to start your new life.”
“Yes… Mommy… Flora…” he replied as she began to rise and fall on his cock once again. He looked proudly upon the army of slaves he’d helped to create, knowing he would lead them to victory under the rule of Norr’s new Queen.
He once again found himself, in his final thoughts as a human being, wondering why he’d bothered to resist her in the first place. From the very beginning, he should have recognized the universal truth.
Mommy Flora is *inevitable*.
THE END