Young Sandra – Feedback from Serpenz

Writer: XP / Serpenz

Subject: Young Sandra

Link: LS666 Email / 25.10.2023

Young Sandra

See — Young Sandra — https://littlesally666.com/young-sandra/ — this was a story that I helped to edit and rewrite for my friend “Sandra In Hell” … I haven’t heard from her in a few years. But, I think of her frequently.

FROM SERPENZ (VIA LS666 EMAIL)

I just got to “littlesally666.com” yesterday. I have read several stories by different authors with pleasure. But here are yours that just delighted me! The first short story I read was “Young Sandra – Journey into Martyrdom”.

I immediately wrote to you as it turned me on incredibly! The ending with the mirror to hell is a wonderful find! The heroine’s scarred twin leads a tour of hell. Hundreds of crosses with young girls nailed to them. Still alive and suffering. The heroine’s sadism toward a few crucified women of her own age. And her martyrdom. It’s beautiful, I love it! I would also add the execution process to the story. Have the heroine observe or even participate in the crucifixion of several girls, and then have herself crucified.

Would there be further developments in the story?

Will the girl and her mom reveal secrets to each other? Will they suffer together? Will the boy be involved? A triple crucifixion would look beautiful — Mom is in the center and the children are opposite her on the right and left.

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The second story was “Forbidden Garden 1” —  Again you wrote everything beautifully! It is very accurately described. In the story, a miracle happens that people with secret desires look forward to very much – finding someone with similar ideals. You are simply the best. The characters in the story go from intimidated miserable people to happy, enjoying life. Things are working out so delightfully well for them! I was happy for them. Lillian aged nine, and Viviane aged eight. Beautiful girls. An excerpt from your story:

“Chris answered the doorbell. He welcomed Sharon’s Aunt into their less-than-modest apartment. From the hallway, she could see her two young girls were both idly lying on the floor in front of the giant flat screen, their attention focused on cartoons. Sharon had dressed them and they were both wearing their matching white shirts, short plaid skirts, and little white socks.”

I love white socks on babies. I wish those girls were crucified on a cross in those socks. Is that possible? How would you feel about that? I’d love to know what you think. In this story, you really intrigue the readers. You stop at a very exciting place. Is there a sequel, or do you leave the reader room for fantasy?

I still have a huge number of questions for you. I hope you will write to me. You are the best writer for me! You touch the most sensitive!

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I was hoping for a more detailed response. But you must be very busy. I wish you had answered other questions on your stories. I would very much like to know your attitude to some details. If it is still possible, please write. I haven’t read much of your work so far. So far I have come across works that use crucifixion of victims. This is my favorite execution. It’s beautiful in every way. But I like a number of other types of executions. Can you tell me about your preferences?

What kinds of executions and torture have you used in your works? Also about age. What’s your favorite? In the pictures before your work, I saw girls in pointe shoes. Do you like ballet? I love it very much. And rhythmic gymnastics. Flexible girls. How do I get all your work? Is there an archive? Or a website where they’re all on display. Maybe several sites? You’re a wonderful writer. I want to read you all the time.

RESPONSE FROM XP (VIA LS666 EMAIL)

Hail Serpenz

Apologies in advance, if my messages are brief. Running the site is full-on. There’s lots to do, so I get very little opportunity to respond to messages and emails. I do, however, appreciate the time you have taken to write to me and translate everything too.

My preferences are usually young transgender or fembois. I’m not so much into sadism or violence — though many of my stories have the elements of rape, crucifixion, bondage, cannibalism, abuse, incest, young one, demons, perversion, religious fetish (nuns and priests), etc — corruption is at the heart of my stories. I love the idea of corruption and the “fall” from grace.

Some of the stories you mention are not mine. Regis is another writer. His most recent story is “The Hanging Of Henrietta Krista” — see link below. He’s a very talented and prolific writer — just use the search function under “Regis” and you will find all his stories there. He also posts on another site called “dolcettish.com” — they contain more violent stories without the emphasis on religious fetish or occult.

https://littlesally666.com/the-hanging-of-henrietta-krista-by-regis/

In regards to your reference to ballet, pointe shoes, etc. Yes, I love the corruption of young dancers — though, in my stories, you will find that they mostly have cocks hidden under their tutus.

Actually, the entire website is an archive of my work from the past 20 years. All my stories are here, plus over 5,000 stories, articles, posts of other similar-minded authors; over 9,000 messages and comments. The site has had over 140,000 visitors this year; and over 1,200,000 views.

Thanks for your positivity and encouragement. XP.

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