UPLOADED — THE DAY OF THE LORD

Writer: XP

Subject: UPLOADED — THE DAY OF THE LORD

Link: THE DAY OF THE LORD

The Day Of The Lord

I hope you enjoy this story. Don’t forget, I need help with my ego issues — as a needy writer (who masturbates far too often), who is always seeking affirmation — give me your comments via email, [email protected] — so that I can use them for my shameless marketing and self-promotion.

ABOUT “THE DAY OF THE LORD”

I have been recently inspired by a bout of exorcism movies.

The first was a 2020 movie called “The Old Ways” set in a remote part of Veracruz, Mexico. Though it was a “B” grade, I enjoyed its darker moments, especially the scene with the snake and bound protagonist. Of course, if I wrote this scene, I would have done it a lot differently. Brigette Kali Canales is so sexy. I wish there had been nude scenes — I’d love to see her breasts and cunt. It was written by Marcos Gabriel and directed by Christopher Alender. Anyway, “The Old Ways” holds no real surprises, but made me think about writing an exorcism story.

“The Day Of The Lord” is also from 2020. It’s a Spanish movie with English subtitles. It’s a very violent and disturbing film. They say that some of the scenes might even distress a hardened horror fan — but I doubt it. All of the film is shot in the priest’s dark and gloomy house and there is only a thin vein of humor to relieve the bleakness of the proceedings. There were good performances by the key actors Juli Fábregas and Ximena Romo. It’s directed and co-written by Santiago Alvarado.

You can see both of them on Netflix.

SYNOPSIS TO “THE DAY OF THE LORD”

Menendez is a former priest, a boy died during an exorcism and he was imprisoned. He drinks whiskey, has nightmares, people appear to him, he speaks to a mysterious person on the phone. It’s difficult to tell his reality from his delusions. A friend he met in prison visits and tells the ex-priest that his preteen daughter, Raquel, is possessed and begs him to perform an exorcism. Eventually, Menendez agrees and the girl arrives at his house. But is she possessed or just an ordinary teenager acting up?

 

PRAISE FOR “THE DAY OF THE LORD”

FROM SYD (VIA LS666 COMMENTS)

Looking forward so much to your next story. You always craft a plot full of decadence, surprises and i really do savor every paragraph, looking forward to whatever unfolds next.

FROM LYCAN REX (VIA MEWE)

I enjoyed it very much, Brother. I love when the pious are corrupted. Also the plot twist I did not see coming. I hope it can continue on with the orphanage, and the children corrupted pious families. 

FROM MICK CARTER (VIA LS666 EMAIL)

XP, OMG! I fucking loved this! She stood up and held her labia minor apart — it looked obscenely beautiful. That’s when, to his perverted delight, he saw the head of the serpent appear between her legs. Her body began to shake. It was as if the serpent was emerging from within the tiny, young girl … like an enormous cock growing inch by inch from her vagina … outwards and upwards … round-ended, like the crown of a penis with its skin rolled back … clear fluids dripped from the eye in its tip.  “Yesssssss!” as she spoke, Menendez saw her forked tongue slither in and out of her childish mouth.  Her delicate fingers curled in his oily hair, gripping him and pulling him closer to her obscene groin with one hand, while the other stroked the veined length of her serpentine phallus. She pressed it to his lips. ”Yessssss … Worship me.” … Beautiful! … Raquel lay naked across the sheets of their piss-wet bed. The bedroom stank — of their stale urine and feces — of their sweat and filthy sex. Her hair was cut short and spikey, like a young boy. Her flattish chest was crowned with two cherry-red, erect nipples. She sucked on her fingers which had become slick with slimy vaginal secretions from her masturbatory pleasures. Her anus still dripped with the priest’s semen from their recent sodomy. She looked up at him, mischievously. “You like it more when I pretend to be that dead boy, … Lou …don’t you?” Oh, wow, wow, wow, fucking wow!

RESPONSE FROM XP (VIA LS666 EMAIL)

It’s a lovely little story. A priest. A demon. A father. A daughter. What more does a story need?

FROM CONNIE K (VIA MEWE)

Awesome, thanks

FROM SYD (VIA LS666 COMMENTS)

Looking forward so much to your next story. You always craft a plot full of decadence, surprises and i really do savor every paragraph, looking forward to whatever unfolds next.

FROM LYCAN REX (VIA MEWE)

I enjoyed it very much, Brother. I love when the pious are corrupted. Also the plot twist I did not see coming. I hope it can continue on with the orphanage, and the children corrupted pious families.

FROM CONNIE K (VIA MEWE)

Awesome, thanks

FROM DUKEZAPER666 (VIA LS666 COMMENTS)

I hope she had her father’s child. The legacy must continue.

FROM SYD (VIA LS666 COMMENTS)

Looking forward so much to your next story. You always craft a plot full of decadence, surprises and i really do savor every paragraph, looking forward to whatever unfolds next.

FROM LYCAN REX (VIA MEWE)

I enjoyed it very much, Brother. I love when the pious are corrupted. Also the plot twist I did not see coming. I hope it can continue on with the orphanage, and the children corrupted pious families. My words do not do you enough praise. What do you mean Brother (watch it on Netflix)? I think it is in Spanish with sub titles. The actress is super hot … You do it so well!

RESPONSE FROM XP (VIA MEWE)

Yes, but it’s got the sub-titles — and it is really bizarre — even before I got hold of it

FROM CONNIE K (VIA MEWE)

Awesome, thanks

FROM ROBERT LEE (VIA MEWE)

Wow! I loved it so hot …

FROM TATI (VIA MEWE)

Baby, a new story yay! … I’m wet already! I can’t wait to lose mind … Oh my God, I’m crazy with lust, I’m out of my fucking mind. That’s the hottest fucking thing ever, oh my fucking God, I can’t believe it I’m so horny, horny, I’m really fucking horny, baby, that was incredible. I want more and more, it was so unexpected …. deliciously unexpected  I love it, I love it, I do, I do, I swear I do.

FROM JENNIFER1972 (VIA FETLIFE)

Love the ending of the story especially, with Raquel on the piss soaked mattress and the room filled with the stench of piss and shit. 

FROM ILLUMINATUS 69 (VIA MEWE)

I’ve read The Day of the Lord: A captivating story that mixes horror with sex. I like the surprising turns of the story, for instance I thought the possession of the girl was only in the mind of the former priest …This former priest is quite rotten in many ways, together with his typical Christian hypocrisy. The taboo topics make the story quite hard. I have to say e.g. the pedophilia adds to the rottenness of the former priest but doesn’t add to my sexual pleasure reading the story. For my taste, the “falling height“ of seduction and corruption is a little bit missing. Altogether, for me it’s a captivating story due to the depravity and surprising turns rather than ultimate sexual arousal.

RESPONSE FROM XP (VIA MEWE)

Thanks for this — yes, I guess I went for the shock factor — have you watched the original movie on Netflix — ‘The Day of the Lord’ on Netflix, a Brutal, Brutally Tasteless Mexican Exorcism Movie (review from the Decider)

https://decider.com/2020/10/30/the-day-of-the-lord-on-netflix-stream-it-or-skip-it/

FROM NICKY NICKETTE (VIA MEWE)

J’ais envie (I want).

FROM HOKU LANI (VIA MEWE)

Is there anything better than a wonderful story of an ex priest on Easter morning helping out an old friend? Sure it’s always a good idea to get a pet for any daughter … ”Well, like, I got her a dog. A pet. She loved it. She walked the dog. Looked after the dog … but things changed suddenly … it was horrible … one night, I caught her with the dog.” Sure he pretends to be offended, assignment of the label unnatural … He saw her playing with the animal on her back. Her face was a that of an angel as she was panting hard … That wasn’t my daughter. That was a demon. A fucking evil demon!” … I for one, cannot wait for additional chapters! … It’s always an honor to read your work.

RESPONSE FROM XP (VIA MEWE)

Thanks, Hoku — beautifully told as usual … my heart, my love!