Writer: XP
Subject: Justice Continues — Uploading Soon
Links to previous chapters:
- Justice 1 — http://littlesally666.com/justice-1-chapters-1-3/
- Justice 2 — http://littlesally666.com/justice-2-chapters-4-6/
- Justice 3 — http://littlesally666.com/justice-3-chapters-7-9/
- Justice 4 — http://littlesally666.com/justice-4/
Justice Continues — Uploading Soon
XP NOTES: Loosely based on one of my favorite stories (The Devil’s Advocate) — Justice was my opportunity to explore the ideas and themes that I thought about whilst watching the 1997 movie; reading the screen play by Jonathan Lemkin and Tony Gilroy; and book by Andrew Neiderman of the same name. If you haven’t seen it or read it — It is a great story. Justice pays homage in part to all of these — but needs to stand its own ground as a tale of darkness and evil.
Justice 5 (chapters 13 – 15)
UPDATE OF THE STORY SO FAR …
Much has happened to, the young and talented, Kevin Swift. Kevin and his wife, Mary Ann, live in Small Town where he practices law as a successful defense attorney. His unblemished record of wins suddenly drew to a dramatic close, whilst he was suppose to defend a woman accused of molesting her under-aged students.
A dream within a dream — left him with a choice to resign the case. And amidst the controversy and media fest that accompanied this type of case in a small backwater of nowhere; the dream foretold that he would rise up to phenomenal heights — moving to Big Town and working for the infamous law firm, Maximus Corp. With many twists and turns — he discovers a satanic underbelly that seeks to crown him as the “Son of Satan” — destined to copulate with his hermaphroditic sister, Christabella, to give birth to the Antichrist. In consequence, all would be laid to waste, including his beloved wife.
Snatched from this fate, he found a way out. But the greasy walls of his unseen prison, gave him no purchase. In no time, Kevin finds himself back in trouble as the plot thickens around him. Taking an appointment in Port-Au-Pearl — he is, once again, faced with unspeakable evil and this time he falls deeper into the sexually depraved web of lies, perversions and ritual murder.
Justice Continues — Uploading Soon
XP NOTES: Loosely based on one of my favorite stories (The Devil’s Advocate) — Justice was my opportunity to explore the ideas and themes that I thought about whilst watching the 1997 movie; reading the screen play by Jonathan Lemkin and Tony Gilroy; and book by Andrew Neiderman of the same name. If you haven’t seen it or read it — It is a great story. Justice pays homage in part to all of these — but needs to stand its own ground as a tale of darkness and evil.
Justice 5 (chapters 13 – 15)
UPDATE OF THE STORY SO FAR …
Much has happened to, the young and talented, Kevin Swift. Kevin and his wife, Mary Ann, live in Small Town where he practices law as a successful defense attorney. His unblemished record of wins suddenly drew to a dramatic close, whilst he was suppose to defend a woman accused of molesting her under-aged students.
A dream within a dream — left him with a choice to resign the case. And amidst the controversy and media fest that accompanied this type of case in a small backwater of nowhere; the dream foretold that he would rise up to phenomenal heights — moving to Big Town and working for the infamous law firm, Maximus Corp. With many twists and turns — he discovers a satanic underbelly that seeks to crown him as the “Son of Satan” — destined to copulate with his hermaphroditic sister, Christabella, to give birth to the Antichrist. In consequence, all would be laid to waste, including his beloved wife.
Snatched from this fate, he found a way out. But the greasy walls of his unseen prison, gave him no purchase. In no time, Kevin finds himself back in trouble as the plot thickens around him. Taking an appointment in Port-Au-Pearl — he is, once again, faced with unspeakable evil and this time he falls deeper into the sexually depraved web of lies, perversions and ritual murder.
Praise for Justice 1 – 4
PRAISE FROM SEYMOUR (VIA EMAIL)
Hi, I have just finished reading the above story, and have enjoyed so many of the stories you have written. You are a very intelligent and creative writer. A few days ago I read “Black candles” and absolutely loved what you did with that. I have watched that movie over and over, very erotic indeed and there is so much sinfulness in it, so much variety, they don’t make them like that anymore and I found the leading lady, (who’s name escapes me), an extremely sensual woman. But what you did would have given that movie an extra edge if she had had a dick. Your imagination, the themes you write about so very well, I thoroughly enjoy them all: corruption, satanism, incest, bi and gay, BDSM, religious themes, the list goes on … I find myself looking forward to every chapter as you have a knack of keeping your reader glued to the page with all your wicked ideas and various scenarios, great wank material .I used to read your stories on ASSTR and was so happy to find you are still writing, and hope you will continue to do so as you are one of my favorite writers of erotic fiction. I have also enjoyed some of the stories submitted by your other contributors, but i have enjoyed your stories above every other writer so it has been very difficult to find anyone who writes as well as you do I have enjoyed some of the other stories by other people but to find anyone who keeps me interested as your stories do, it a tall order and I find myself comparing them to you and if they waffle on too much or do not have your vivid and delicious imagination, I will soon become bored, but as I said, credit where it’s due, some of the other writers on your pages have done well. I am still finding stories of yours I haven’t read which I am grateful for. I hope you do not tire of writing your wonderful stories. It’s a pity Disney don’t convert them into movies. As the nun said to the vicar, “Please don’t stop ! Keep it up !”
PRAISE FROM HOKU LANI (VIA EMAIL)
“Don’t worry White Devil … nobody cares what we do here …“Maison Du Diable Maléfique” is known as the Devil’s sex club,” explained Chedeline, “So don’t be shy — White Devil … anything and everything is possible here …” — Anything and everything is always possible in this outstanding story! Thank you, for the continued writing and elevation of lust.
PRAISE FROM MICK MICHAELS (VIA EMAIL)
I read it and must say CONGRATS on another exciting chapter.— After your last entry I was wondering how you’d wrap up the story. Glad to see you still played out the scene back in the original court room with the reporter. But where Hollywood ended things there you kept going and added something entirely new that I had not considered before… a sort of whole new landscape to tell a completely new adventure and I LOVE IT. It was like the beginning of a new movie (perhaps in a trilogy that Hollywood seems to be so fond of these days).
I do hope you write more and tell the story of our hero (yes, I am rooting for him to fully embrace his Satanic side and give in completely to the lustful creature he was always meant to be). Perhaps your next chapters can wrap up the question of whether his sister really did seduce his wife (I hope so). And it can tell of the rape and delicious meal to be had from the hairless goats (would love to taste their flesh – on my cock and my tongue). And (most importantly) of the joining together of brother and sister and their bringing forth the Satanic offspring that they are destined to gift to the world.
And after telling that story (part 2 of the trilogy) then you could make the final story into yet another adventure whereby this time mother/father (brother/sister) become supporting characters to the development of their Satanic offspring and his rise to power. That would be the perfect way to wrap up the story lines for this round of characters and to create a whole new world for a new generation of characters. Just like Satan is doing in real life, you are World Building. And I LOVE the world your stories lay out before us and I hope they are in some way a preview of the real-life world that Satan in building around us. They are also a HELL of a lot of fun to stroke my cock to and I’m sure they have many cunts dripping as others read your wonderful words. You really do have a gift and I encourage you to keep it going. I know it takes a lot of work and time and so I say THANK YOU for putting in that work to share your creations with us. We love it and we love you for being so kind to share with us all.
REPLY FROM XP (VIA MEWE)
Hail Mick – There are some interesting ideas here to think about — It always takes time for e story to percolate (I had been working on this one for four months and this was edit version 47) … but I thank you for the words of encouragement as it takes a huge amount of time and effort to push the storytelling to embrace all the elements we both love — occult sex, transgenderism, demonology, young ones, ritual abuse and human sacrifice — and I have found the inspiration for all of this in the REAL WORLD … I will give the next steps some serious thought — but may leave this, to work on something else, as this also helps to drive me back to a story after a break … Thanks again. XP
PRAISE FROM JAMES F (VIA EMAIL)
XP, Justice was a great series. As Satan’s offspring were breeding & rutting with lust I became more and more fidgety in my chair and before I knew it I felt an orgasm coming even without touching myself. I was that aroused and surely the lustful spirit of our lord Satan was with me. I shot my load in a cup of wine and drank it as communion for my lord Satan. Masturbating now remembering how good it felt. Hail Satan!
PRAISE FROM RANULF666 (VIA EMAIL)
Hail XP. I have just finished reading Justice 4 and I had an aching erection as I did so. Instead of the original book’s ending in a prison library, you are taking us dark souls on an evil journey, graphically and deliciously described. Please don’t stop here. Let’s have the Antichrist and all the malevolence that we, his followers, delight in. I knew that you were good, but I did not know that you were this good. Bonjour Satan!
PRAISE FROM PETER T (VIA EMAIL)
Thanks XP! I just caught up to JUSTICE_01-4… damn, what a gripping story! I love the mind fuckery … swapping in Christabella for Mary Ann … holy shit! \m/
PRAISE FROM NIKITALOVE (VIA HANGOUTS)
Luv your Justice 4.
PRAISE FROM FRODO2010 (VIA EMAIL)
I just finished Justice 4. WOW! I love where this story is going. The evil is so delicious. As I am reading, I am wishing this was real and I could actually be there, participating. As a theistic Satanist, this is how I imagine Satan would want to and should be worshiped. A bit of a departure from the Devil’s Advocate, but in my mind, a good departure. I had always wished that the movie could show more evil and perversion than it did. I really appreciate your writing and hope you decide to continue this story. Thanks — Hail Satan
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Hail Frodo — thanks for the encouragement — it was always to a departure … though I did draw many of the best parts from the book and the movie — but just intensified the things that we all love best — the evil, darkness and corruption … HAIL LVST
PRAISE FROM BROKEN GRUNTY AKA EDITING CHIEF (VIA EMAIL)
I like the new ending. Personally I think Kevin, right after the dream where he sees his wife falling into sin, should have turned around and started making out with Christabella. Jerking each other off as they dueled with their tongues. Completely giving in to his fate. But that’s just me. I still liked it since it brings in Mary. It would be hilarious if Mary ends up having Christabella’s child rather than Kevin’s. As for my story, I’ll get back to it when I have the time. Now that places are opening back up I now have to do the things I’d been able to put off for a time. I think I have a good way to connect the parts together but I just need the time, and energy, to put words on the screen and see how they come out.
PRAISE FROM DIRGROS (VIA EMAIL)
Hail Satan, Brother!! — I don’t have the least doubt that I will enjoy it. You’re my favorite writer of erotica. Especially dark erotica.
PRAISE FROM BLUE SATANIST (VIA EMAIL)
Regardless of whether or not you post this on the website, I want you to know that i read this around noon today while I was on the toilet, stroking my needy girlcock and avoiding my zoom class. You truly have a writing style that makes me so deviously horny, and I always end up craving so so so much more from each and every chapter — You’re a treasure and a great role model! Hail Lust, Hail Filth, Hail Satan!
PRAISE FROM OPENNOSECRETS69 (VIA MEWE)
Just read it. It’s awesome. I’m looking forward to the next chapters and feeling the perversions pile on top of each other! Hail Satan! -You serve Satan well my friend. We must pursue His evil!
PRAISE FROM HOKU LANI (VIA MEWE)
Hail Xpanther !!! This version of the story is immensely improved over the movie. The phallic symbolism, occult, witchcraft, paganism and sigils of demonology. He paints it as a tale dedicated to the diabolic worship of supernatural evil and the most lustrous tale of brother and sister intertwined in incestuous bliss under the watchful eyes of their father to bring on his grandson … The Antichrist!!! … I for one can not await additional chapters in this glorious saga.
PRAISE FROM Лиза Серпухова (VIA MEWE)
AVE SATANAS!!! Master! Sorry for the silence. I want to express my delight from the continuation of the story. You give it as a medicine for our lust, your medicine is so delicious ,reading it you get wet i want to be there and participate in all this! unfortunately this medicine is over, I’m waiting for the next …
REPLY FROM XP (VIA MEWE)
Hail Satanas … thank you for making my day! It takes a lot to write these types of things and it’s great to get positive feedback to encourage me to keep going and “feed” my hungry ego … haha … XP
PRAISE FROM DANG LA (VIA MEME)
Great story! Very hot.
PRAISE FROM SATANAS (VIA MEME)
Your stories are the best ever! Hail Satan
PRAISE FROM MEATLOVERS SPECIAL (VIA MEME)
Outstanding! More reading material for tonight! Thank you, brother.
PRAISE FROM CERI DEMON (VIA MEME)
Love the story
PRAISE FROM ANKUR (VIA EMAIL)
Hey, congrats for the forth edition! — Plot looks amazing. Very excited to check it out.
PRAISE FROM FERNANDO (VIA EMAIL)
Great history … only You can write like that … Hail Satán! Go ahead!
PRAISE FROM NADA BITS (VIA EMAIL)
Make this me Satan. — She rubbed her cock-flesh against my cheeks and then pressed its drooling black tip against my lips — pressed gently into my mouth as she gyrated to the pagan beat. My tongue snaked out, licking at it. My lips opened and closed around its curved form, sucking upon it as the demon began to fuck my face.
PRAISE FROM TURTURE (VIA EMAIL)
Hail, I have now finally read the two first parts of Justice (chapters 1-6). I don’t know what held me back … I love it so far! The plot is set in a very delicate way, slowly getting darker and more evil … I have just opened part three and started with chapter 7. I noticed that there are several parts yet for me to indulge in. I’m just wondering if reading it will corrupt me as well? That enough of praise right now… PP … OUuuuh … I just noticed that chapter 9 is the last published so far … for some reason I thought there where many more there already for me to read. Now I just have to wait.
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Will not be long … almost ready with the final 3 chapters (10 – 12)
PRAISE FROM KUMAR (VIA EMAIL)
Justice was extremely good to read. I have been reading your stories once more from the site for the past 2 and half months and it has become the only material for my masturbation which I have been doing like a ritual — Please recommend any other sites with Satanic porn and stories filled with depravity and blasphemous videos — Whenever I search for any satanic porn in regular porn sites it is only filled with limited number of videos — I have read in one of the blogs that there were even priest fucking boys videos which I searched but could not find.
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Hail Kumar — Thanks for the kind remarks — with regards to finding new satanic porn — have you joined religiousfetish.com? You can find lots of satanic groups on MEWE … Also, I wanted to say … this is why I started LITTLESALLY666.COM — because, at the time, there wasn’t much to read on it …
PRAISE FROM RANDULF666 (VIA EMAIL)
Hail XP, — I greatly enjoyed reading chapters 1 to 3. It is many years since I saw the film, and your description brought back vivid memories of it. I noticed where you made changes, starting with the pedophile defendant, and that you are leading us, gently but inexorably, towards deeper and more degenerate areas than the film was able to explore. Your story is a perfect complement to the film, and your writing style is excellent; very well crafted and engaging.
PRAISE FROM TKUL777 (VIA EMAIL)
PRAISE FROM MARC & TANYA (VIA EMAIL)
HAIL XP!!!!!! — I’m so fucking grateful to our GOD SATAN for your srtist and Satanic gifts;thanks for remembering us upon the birth of your latest literary masterpiece. I’ve known my lover, Tatiana, for less than a year, but the longer I know her, the more I am convinced that she is a great gift from our Satanic Lord. I was raised in a Xtian home, and corrupted by its systemic indoctrination; I’ve struggled with the chains of Xtian lies and have only recently found the utter freedom of Satan’s Kingdom and love through Tatiana. Tatiana and I are completely dedicated to debauchery, SIN and the spread of Satan’s Kingdom on Earth. We are very thankful for your debauched and unholy chronicles, and wish you the hedonistic blessings of our Dark Lord. Praise Satan. Marc and Tanya
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Hi Marc and Tanya — Thanks for writing to me … you are truly both blessed … and I would be lying if I said I wasn’t jealous … My gf is afraid of my dark passions … so unfortunately, I have to keep them to myself … Hail to you both. Hail Satan … Hail evil lvst !
PRAISE FROM ALEX SANDERS (VIA MEWE)
I love the incest, age-gap, DS, occult themes, abuse. All taboo, but so wonderful interwoven through your unique erotica — The first chapter of that link you sent me, reminded me almost exact of a Keanu Reeves movie.. I think it was the Devil’s Advocate
REPLY FROM XP (VIA MEWE)
The story line was based upon the movie, the screen play and the book – it’s one of my favorites – but I wanted to do it first person … so it makes it more personal, however the ‘first person narrative’ also doesn’t allow me to show things that the protagonist isn’t able to see.
RESPONSE FROM ALEX SANDERS (VIA MEWE)
True, I enjoyed it — Loved how you delved into the very real aspect of perversion seducing those on the outside looking in — You could still keep with the first person narrative, but split sections where viewpoint changes from the perspective of a different character’s eyes, during the same time frames … I don’t have writer’s speak for what this is called, but I’ve seen many other Authors write this way.
REPLY FROM XP (VIA MEWE)
I have done that before myself — but in this instance, because I wanted the story to told in first person, I resisted the temptation to do that — and tried to tell the story through the eyes of the protagonist only.
PRAISE FROM LAZAR (VIA EMAIL)
Hello dear XP. – Nice to see your new stories again! I haven’t read anything for a long time, so this story suited me perfectly. I don’t understand much in law and advocacy but I’m looking forward to Kevin Swift’s new adventures.
PRAISE FROM RICL (VIA EMAIL)
Wow another great story. I can see this thing going in many directions I’ll be waiting for the next chapter
PRAISE FROM BAD BILL (VIA EMAIL)
I finally read all the chapters. I liked it. I think it could have departed from the movie a bit more. Like, for example, Kevin and Mary Ann could have had a daughter who Kevin gives to Dr. Moyez for ‘training’ and is then returned to the ‘family.’ Or, Kevin’s mother could have been seen the futility of her Christian church, embraces the father of her son, and participates in the debauchery — Will there be more chapters?
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Hail Bill — there are three more chapters to go … and yes … they depart from where chapter 9 ends … thanks for the thoughts — much appreciated
PRAISE FROM FRODO (VIA EMAIL)
Sorry, it took me awhile before I could rad this. it is excellent! Sort of reminds me of that movie with Keanu Reeves and Al Pacino, “The Devils Advocate”. thank you so much for writing this chapter. The way it ended, I so look forward to chapter2. Frodo — BTW I see you have a NewTumbl blog — Hail Satan!
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Hail Frodo — Thanks for the encouragement — the story is taken from a combination of the movie, book and the script — it does say this upfront (as I am not trying to take credit for this wonderful idea) — it’s just do in “first person” from the view of the protagonist and is a lot darker and depraved.
REPLY FROM FRODO (VIA EMAIL)
Sorry, I completely missed your XP notes for this story or i would have seen you based it somewhat on the Devils Advocate, also one of my favorites. I love how it ends — Well now that i know this story is based on The Devils Advocate, when reading chapters 4 – 6, I am just following along with what happens in the movie. Chapters 4 – 6 are excellent. Of course for me now Milton has the face of Al Pacino and Kevin has the face of Keanu Reeves. Even Bael has the face of Craig T. Nelson. Thank you for this story. I can not wait for future chapters.
PRAISE FROM MARCUS (VIA EMAIL)
Hail XP – That is so well written great start. That made me hard reading it — How you doing XP ? It is funny since I have been reading your stories I have been horny more and having better Sex with my wife. Been having lots of rape fantasies
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL)
Hail Marcus — glad that satanic sex between baphometic (shemale) demons and lawyers, who don’t give a fuck about their wives — gets you off as much as it does me too! Rape fantasies are super hot too!
PRAISE FROM SHELL SHOCK (VIA EMAIL)
It’s a strong start and keeps the tone of the original movie, while doing a well deserved twist you’ve made us all (your readers and visitors of your site) accustomed to. You set up the scene nicely to a climax one can only hope for will be as interesting as your past adaptations. In doing so, you don’t disappoint. A strong start, hopefully a well paced story — regards and keep it up!
PRAISE FROM Лиза Серпухова (VIA MEWE)
Exciting, exciting start! i feel there will be a lot of evil. really looking forward to continuing. AVE SATANAS! – – I am delighted! Kevin’s dream made me leak, and the scene when he dreams of masturbating his wife made me masturbate. i like the way everything happens slowly, tastefully. evil is coming! AVE SATANAS!!! Looking forward to continuing!
PRAISE FROM LOVEPEDIGREE (VIA TUMBLR)
Onto the list. Always look forward.
PRAISE FROM BOBBY YOUNG (VIA MEWE)
Thank you!
PRAISE FROM SODOMITE 666 (VIA MEWE)
Awesome!
PRAISE FROM KIM HALL (VIA EMAIL)
More please, keep going
PRAISE FROM BETHAN PAGAN (VIA MEWE)
Loved the new story mr pervert — I love the way that you write
PRAISE FROM BOBBY YOUNG (VIA MEWE)
Great intro…i love the idea of being forced and made to feel helpless..of course your body doesn’t lie..and there is always a point of no return when you do things uncontrollably…
PRAISE FROM LUSTISMYGOD (VIA TUMBLR)
PRAISE FROM HOKU LANI (VIA MEWE)
Thanks, I will read this weekend after work today. I have been waiting for these chapters for a while and will enjoy, I’m confident. Sorry, I was out and spent some time at a cottage this week. I enjoyed it, as I could see the first three chapters set up the rest of the story. I particularly enjoyed the direction in chapter three. I sense that this will be good series. I particularly liked the intertwined group of girls before the altar, as well as the potential for future stories of perversions. It left me wanting more 😉
RESPONSE FROM XP (VIA MEWE)
What were your favorite parts?
PRAISE FROM HOKU LANI (VIA MEWE)
Going through the iron door and the discovery of all the possessed girls intertwined, licking hairless pussies and how it was exciting the lawyer — At the time I beloved the defendant cut off his trial prep, only to learn that the prosecutor couldn’t talk without coughing —As always your writing is always on point and great to get juices flowing.
PRAISE FROM HOKU LANI FOR CHAPTERS 4 TO 6 (VIA MEWE)
PRAISE FROM ADDICTED PENIS MASTURBATOR (VIA EMAIL)
Hail XP — Thanks for the link, I am looking forward to indulging into your explicit writing of what we both love to use to feed our dark and perverted desires. I hope you masturbated while working on the succulent details, as I will masturbate when I consume every detail of it — I love your open and unabashed request for compliments and encouragement — this is how we should be, it is natural, it is deserved in your case, and it establishes a magic virtual link between the writer and reader, acknowledging the sexual stimulation we derive, you producing and I consuming it. Your writing deserves a much larger audience, for once because you write in a very artistic style, and secondly, it would corrupt more weak souls to bring them into the fold of Satan, releasing ever more demonic energy to the delight of our Master — Hail Satan! — Addicted Penis Masturbator — BTW — are you on Telegram? there are some groups with great visuals to stimulate satanic cravings …
REPLY FROM XP (VIA EMAIL) — Haha … yes … I’m very upfront IRL too … take me as you see me, kind of thing … mainly because I cannot run away from the fact that I am only 5’2″ and 140 pounds … with only 5″ of cock flesh — everyone seems so focused on “big is better” — so I bow out of that race! Let me know what you think of “Justice” — as I am looking for good “sound bites” for self-promotion — haha — XP
PRAISE FROM NIKITALUST666 (VIA GOOGLE HANGOUTS)
Like the buildup of the characters. A lasting gushing lust … lol
PRAISE FROM LUST DEMON 666 (VIA MEWE)
Hail LUST
PRAISE FROM PETER T (VIA EMAIL)
Thanks XP! Another fine photo chosen for your work… You’re welcome XP! I thoroughly enjoyed your story! Gripping! I’m a complete sucker for erotic dreams! I hope you’ll write more chapters!
PRAISE FROM DAVID A (VIA EMAIL)
Hi Xpanther. Wanted to let you know I adore your site and the feelings of lust I have when reading your stories. I live in Georgia, having grew up small town. I grew up Christian until I met this guy and let him fuck my ass. I got married later on but still loved getting fucked up the ass. She doesn’t know. Would love to chat with satanists. If you know of any locally or that would like to talk let me know. Hail Satan.
PRAISE FROM CHESTIRE (VIA RELIGIOUS FETISH)
Luv it. These first chapters are a real tease. Anxious for the next three.
PRAISE FROM MARCUS & TANYA ZUHLKE (VIA EMAIL)
Just fucking love your stories, the all remind me of my current love and future wife (she love them too). So much of what you write rings true for us; it’s a fucking lonely world when your essence is depravity and Devil worship. —— Thanks for creating such wonderful and living erotical you’re the fucking best! —— Hail Satan! —— Marcus and Tanya Zuhlke
PRAISE FROM DISCORDANTVIBE (VIA RELIGIOUS FETISH)
That was quite impressive. I really appreciate how you weave the biblical quotations and religious descriptions into the story. It adds a great authority to the story because I can sense you really know the material and draws me into the journey with the protagonist. I especially enjoyed your use of architectural description of Maximus’ offices. It set a wonderful tone—slightly sinister and erotica. You are very talented. One small notes: I appreciate your courage in using race so boldly. The wife is a hotwife vixen and plays with bbc. I can assure you the word nigger does get used. It is a form of race play after all. I’m not sure if you are a guilty Christian or a Satanist, but these are wickedly erotic tales. Bravo.
REPLY BY XP (VIA RELIGIOUS FETISH) – Hail DISCORDANTVIBE – Thank you for the encouragement. Actually I am both … more accurately, I was a guilty Christian, who then discovered the pleasures of sin and Satan (and Lilith) … you should check out the rest of my blog – many of my stories are based on the “fall” from Christian values and the journey of discovery of depravity and perversion that makes me so excited … honestly, I’m not into BBC, but I do enjoy dark skin (as I was married to a dark skinned person for a long time – so I kind of know prejudice well at it how demeaning it is … there’s sexual thrill to use the ‘nigger’ word in a derogatory manner … another of Satan’s joys? XP
PRAISE FROM STUFFITINN (VIA RELIGIOUS FETISH)
Excellent … and yes, I know the movie. Charlize Theron is too damn hot and the red head in the movies is as well. If that red head were my sister, I’d have fucked her without question! Of late, The Vatican Tapes is one that turns me on. I have often said, if the Anti-Christ is everything Jesus is not, then it has to be a woman. Can’t wait to read it! — Awesome! Knowing the movie, I like how you changed the gender on a few of the characters … makes it even better. Can’t wait for your spin on the rest of the movie!
REPLY BY XP (VIA RELIGIOUS FETISH) – Hail StuffItInn – I also read the book and the screen play — the pedophile woman is taken from the book version — I liked it for the reason you mentioned, it puts a different spin and I know that most have seen the movie, but not so many have read the book … glad you approve … hail XP
As always, a triumphant delivery! The first three chapters were simply outstanding, only to be outdone by the following three. The party was perfect and I could see myself with my face buried in. Nikki’s crotch. As I read along my phone slipped from my slippery fingers.