The serpent’s head slumped to the floor, scarlet blood gushing from its severed neck. The rest of the body stood for a second longer before collapsing into a writhing heap on the smooth, black basalt. Heidr snorted, spitting a few drops of blood from his mouth. He never quite got used to the metallic tang. He wiped his sword on the tattered remains of his tunic, tossing the fabric aside and striding forward in little more than blood, sweat and a loincloth. His thick mane of blond hair stuck to his neck. His skin glistened in the light of the strange red torches, strong muscles rippling under tanned brown skin.

It had been a long climb. And one full of peril.

The enormous snake he’d encountered in this shrine -with its pillars of black and gold encircling a colossal jewel-encrusted statue of some profane deity- had not been the first danger. There had been the lions at the gates of the outer wall, the half-human ape things that roamed the courtyards and, of course, the demonic guardian of the tower doors. All had met similar ends at Heidr’s hands and longsword. No mere plunderer could ever conceive of trying to raid the Black Keep, and yet here he was in the belly of it. But he couldn’t stop and loot; not until he knew for sure that the sorceress who ruled here was dead. Magic users had an annoying habit of holding grudges, you see.

Heidr kicked his sandals away, padding quietly across cold stone floors and hefting his sword in two hands. There was something in the air that had his skin erupting in goose-bumps; a tingle, a spark of life. Magic, most likely, coupled with the growing smell of spiced incense. He was getting closer to her chambers. He climbed a spiral staircase that seemed to cover the whole circumference of the enormous tower, creeping inch by inch, tapping with his foot for pressure plates and tripwires. Nothing. Either she did not expect anyone to make it this far -an understandable assumption for any other mortal man- or she was confident enough in her abilities.

And if she were confident, Heidr would have to be quick in slaying her.

At last, the basalt stairs brought him to a door. Solid mahogany, set with vast squares of obsidian and gold filigree depicting acts both macabre and lewd. He pressed his ear to it and heard nothing. That set his nerves on edge. He took a few steps back, squared his shoulders, and charged. The door swung open easily, and it was only his experience in battle that stopped him from tumbling to the hard floor. Instead, he slowed, brandishing his sword and searching for immediate danger.

The room was large and circular, with the same ring of black and gold pillars as the shrine below. But where below there was a statue to some serpentine abomination, here there was a broad, raised dais covered in large pillows and exotic furs. Figures lounged among them; women of many shades but one shape, namely petite and willowy. And at the center of the dozen or so slender girls stood a tall, imposing figure with a predatory smile.

Her skin and statuesque beauty made her look as if she had been carved from the same basalt as her keep, but she was so full of warmth and life that she seemed to be a fire among black ice. Like the stone, she too was adorned with gold and jewels, in the form of bangles on her arms and feet, chains and pendants dangling between full breasts, and a bright girdle that hung on her ample hips. Not a scrap of cloth to provide her voluptuous frame with any sort of modesty. Her body was void of hair, including on her head, and everything shone as if she were oiled. Her smile and slow, deliberate movements gave her all the grace and power of a big cat as she stood, staring down at the barbarian.

“Welcome, brave Heidr,” She purred, “I am Yomela, and I have been expecting you.”

Heidr grunted, readying his sword.

“Oh? Not a word for your gracious host?” Yomela smirked, “And after I went through such trouble to provide you with entertainment.”

“Perhaps you should have found me something more challenging,” Heidr said bluntly.

“And exhaust you too soon? You’re not the only one who enjoys a good struggle.”

“Then we could have met alone. Or do you need your tricks and traps to fight?”

“I need no defenses. My wiles alone disarm my foes.” She dragged her hands down her curves, the bangles and chains tinkling.

“Your wiles won’t save y-” Heidr started, before something between a gust of wind and an enormous fist slammed into his stomach, sending him hurtling through the air and onto the hard floor with a sickening crack. He pushed himself onto his knees, struggling for breath before another slammed into his back from above.

“I didn’t say my wiles were all I had, barbarian,” Yomela chuckled. She flicked her hand up, and the invisible hand threw Heidr into the air, crashing him into the ceiling before he collapsed into a heap at the steps of the dais. “Come now, kneeling so soon? I expected more from you.”

Heidr snarled, whirling on one foot and swinging the massive sword at the sorceress’ unprotected neck. He felt the blade stop in something, and for a second, he smiled until he noticed that his arms had stopped as well. Everything had stopped as if hundreds of invisible hands were holding him in place. The sword’s blade quivered a mere inch away from Yomela’s neck, and one inch more away from her frightening smile.

“A noble attempt,” She said. Yomela pushed the blade down and out of Heidr’s hands with two fingers, stepping down the dais and passing behind him. “But a foolish one. Do you know how many like you have tried the same trick?”

“I will be the first to succeed.” Heidr shook as he tried to pull himself free from whatever spell was holding him fast.

“They all said the same. Didn’t you, slaves?”

It was only then that Heidr noticed something about the figures that had lounged on the dais; not one of them had breasts. They were slender and girlish, with long hair and soft faces, but their hips were also small and their chests completely flat. They were nearly naked, dressed in just a silk loincloth and identical chokers, each with a single smooth, white gem dangling from it. One of them shifted their legs, and the loincloth fell away. Heidr’s eyes widened; they were not women at all. They were -or perhaps had been- men.

“What curse have you wrought on them, witch?” Heidr hissed, struggling against the invisible bindings.

“Curse? Ha!” Yomela’s bark of laughter was like the tolling of an ominous bell, “I have freed them from the curse they were born with. A curse you share.”

“What are you babbling about?”

“Oh, you think you’re so mighty, don’t you? Cleaving your way through every problem, thinking only about the next thing you can kill, or eat, or fuck,” Yomela cupped his chin with her hand, “It’s so… pathetic. Like you have something you need to prove. Some desperate need to show the world ‘I am a man!’ Tell me, barbarian; who are you proving yourself to?”

“Stop speaking in riddles, witch!” Heidr snarled.

“Maybe you don’t know yourself. Or maybe… the person you are trying to prove your might to is yourself. Because deep down in that thick head of yours…” She lent in close, whispering in his ear, “You know you’re not a real man at all.”

“Your words and tricks will not sway me!”

“They do not need to. My actions will speak far louder.” Yomela pushed his head back. He felt like he would fall for half a second before his body seemed to float in the air as if he were suspended in water. Or perhaps something thicker, like oil. Regardless, Yomela could move him as though he were paper. She floated him away from the dais, pushing his limbs until he was prone. With a little smirk, she yanked his loincloth away. Her eyebrow cocked, and she smiled at him, tracing a finger along his exposed shaft. “My, it’s almost a shame to waste this.”

“Is that all you have sought? Someone to lie with?” Heidr scoffed.

“I have lain with many. And will lay with many more. But this thing of yours will never get to enjoy me, barbarian.”

Heidr struggled against the invisible force. “You are cruel, witch!”

“No. What I offer is mercy,” Yomela said. Her hands slipped around his cock and balls, slowly palming them both. Her soft skin felt good, he had to admit, and she knew exactly where to touch and squeeze. It wasn’t long before he was rock hard. A clench of Heidr’s teeth was the only thing stopping him from groaning aloud.

“You will have to do more than that to cow me.”

“And I will.”

She pulled her hands away and snapped her fingers. Heidr gasped as a hundred different sensations suddenly enveloped his shaft: as if dozens of hands were stroking at once, mixed with many more tongues and the silky smooth walls of impossible orifices gliding over his flesh. His cock stood tall and proud as if held up by the invisible force. There was no heat, no warmth to the ghostly touches, but there was just so many…

Yomela tapped the top of his head, dead on the crown, and something cold slithered under his skin. It seeped into his brain, dripped down his spine, flowed through every tiny nerve until his whole body was soaked in magic. It pumped through his veins, wallowed in his organs. And yet it all seemed to be drawn to one spot in particular; the same place the ghostly hands were caressing and teasing, pooling at the base of his cock as the pleasant pressure grew.

“What do you plan for me? Death by ecstasy?” Heidr growled.

“There is no death in your near future, barbarian,” Yomela said, “I seek to purify you. To remake you into something beautiful, just like I did to the others who lie beside my bed. Even now my magic is changing you, drinking up the worst parts of your body and mind. Arrogance, violence, the need to prove yourself a ‘real man’ when we both know you deserve better.

“Plainly, witch! I have no time for your mind games!”

“Very well, Heidr. What I am doing…” Her lips curled into a cruel smile, “Is draining away your manhood.”

Heidr let it the idea sink in for just a second, before roaring and struggling against the magic that held him aloft. But it held fast. It felt as if he were encased in stone, or paralyzed by some vile poison.

“Please, struggle for me! I love to see you panic before the realization sets in,” Yomela laughed, “They all did you know. But in the end, they surrendered. And most of all, they enjoyed it. As will you too.”

He groaned, biting his lip and trying to push the pleasurable sensations out of his mind, but the ghostly tongues and tips just upped their tempo, curling around every inch of his cock and balls. Already he was hovering on the edge. The gentle flowing chill seemed to pulse, a wave moving down from his head and limbs until it crashed and bubbled at his hips. Heidr could taste blood as he bit harder on his lip, straining to hold back the oncoming tide.

And failing.

A flash of white in his mind and his cock rippled with pleasure. Ropes of cum sprayed out of him as his hips tried their best to buck into his ghostly lovers. A single ragged breath was the closest he gave Yomela the satisfaction of hearing. As the last spasm in his hips faded, he found himself soaked in sweat and still very much immobile. His head cleared, and he blinked. His cum was also suspended: it floated above his still hard cock, gently drifting together until it formed a small, semi-translucent orb about the size of a marble.

Before he had a chance to think about what magic was afoot the invisible tongues and fingers and holes started back up on his cock, making him shout; it was too intense, and too soon!

“That’s quite the mess you make,” Yomela said as she stood behind his head, “You must be more eager than I thought.”

“Eager? For what? This humiliation?!” Heidr snarled. He winced as something squeezed around his throbbing tip.

“Humiliation? Oh, please. You’re the one humiliating yourself by trying to live up to such a vile standard.”

“I don’t know what it is you think, witch, but I will not submit!”

“But it felt wonderful, did it not? The strongest orgasm you’ve ever had, ripping through you…” She chuckled, tracing a finger up his stomach, “And how easy it was to coax out of you. You may protest, but your body does not. Why, I think it revels in rejecting your masculinity!”

“Lies!” Heidr shouted before a spasm of pleasure shot through him.

“Don’t deny it, barbarian. Even now another orgasm is building in you: another chance for your body to expel that filthy manhood of yours. It’s so eager to cum… so eager to surrender.”

He screamed as the second orgasm shook him, stronger than the first. But still, the invisible digits worked and worked, already building the pressure even as the last drop floated out of him. Had Yomela’s spell removed his limits…?

“Mmm… that’s it,” Yomela stroked his hair softly, “Doesn’t it feel so good to just let go of all that nasty manliness?”

Heidr gasped, his hips bucking upwards as another orgasm ripped along his cock. His eyes rolled back in his head as spurt after spurt of cum erupted from his sensitive tip.

“Ooh, that was a big one. It’s getting easier, isn’t it? That’s it, mighty Heidr… cum! Cum your masculinity away!”

He whimpered, closing his eyes and biting his lip as the soft, invisible force caressed every inch of his painfully stimulated cock. His body shuddered, and his muscles felt like they were water being siphoned away. A tingle crept up his skin as the hair on his body dropped away, withering and vanishing in mid-air. He stared down in disbelief as his form turned from muscular to toned, then toned to slender, and slender to soft and girlish. All the while feeling like his old mass was pooling in his aching balls, the pressure building again for another-

He screamed, the strongest orgasm yet wiping his mind with a flash of white. It was feeling less wrong now. Less forced and more… more like he wanted it. Like he craved the feeling of cumming over and over. His mouth hung open, and his tongue lolled, the tingling in his face growing with each pulse along his cock. He could barely think. Barely feel. Barely do anything except watching in aroused fascination as his body reshaped itself.

The final orgasm came. It was weak and pathetic, barely more than a few dribbles of cum and a quiet jolt of pleasure, but his exhausted body and mind were relived. He watched with a pang of loss as each squirt of cum sapped away just a little bit of his length -a centimeter of girth from his once proud member-until finally the last drop was sucked out of his tiny, smooth small cock and into the ball of cum floating above him.

He dropped to the floor, a sweaty aching mess.

Yomela licked her lips, slowly pulling the small orb of cum towards her. A few waves of her fingers and it condensed; squeezed itself together until it could fit in the palm of her hand. She clenched her fist around it, and when she opened her hand, there lay a single, smooth stone. Milky-white and solid.

“There we are,” She said, “My, my, so much more than some of the others…”

Heidr rolled onto his front, groping for his sword. He propped his shaking body up and glared at the sorceress as he steadied his limb. He gripped the sword in both hands, raising it above his head-

Only for it to fall down and clunk against the black stone. He looked down at his thin, willowy arms: he didn’t even have the strength to lift it anymore, let alone swing it.

“What have you-?” He started, before grabbing his throat in horror. That was not his voice. It was higher. Girlier. “Return me to my old self at once, witch!”

Yomela laughed, “And if I do not?”

“Then I will make you pay, you whorish-!”

“Kneel.”

Heidr dropped to his knees, hands folded neatly on his lap. He blinked, looking down at his slender body in horror. “What enchantment…?”

“Enchantment? Oh, none of that, dear boy,” Yomela purred, running her hand through his hair. She slowly turned his head upwards, smiling down at him. Had she always been so tall…? “This is just who you are now. Docile, obedient… the perfect little slave.”

“I am no slave!”

“Bow.”

And he did, putting his head onto the floor. He did not feel any compulsion or force of will on his mind. Nothing at all… he just did as he was told, when he was told it. His heart pounded in his chest. Worst of all, he realized he had done it willingly.

“Up, slave.”

And so he did. “What is this…? What have you done?!”

“I told you; I took away all of your masculinity. Every last drop of it,” Yomela said, “No aggression, no arrogance, no ego… nothing in your head anymore except complete submission. And your body too… oh, look at how pretty you are!”

She picked up the sword and propped it in front of him, and in its blade, he could see his new form. He was just like the others on the dais: slender, soft and girlish. Almost indistinguishable from a woman, the only hints being his flat chest, small hips and pathetic little cock. He touched his face, eyes widening as he traced along his new cheeks. He was trembling, his proud mane now more akin to a waterfall of gold. He looked…

“Pretty…?” He mouthed.

Yomela chuckled, and Heidr’s cheeks flared bright red.

“So you’re seeing it now, aren’t you?” She said, leaning on the sword, “All that time you spent making yourself muscular… all those hours spent plundering tombs and wrestling beasts… all of it was to try and live up to something you were not. You were never meant to be a strong man. But all those pressures, all those insecurities forced you down a path you could never finish.”

“What… am I…?”

“You? Simple,” She pushed his chin upwards, purple eyes meeting his, “You were always meant to be a submissive thing. A docile little girly slave.”

“No, I… I’m a…!” Heidr shook his head.

“And yet you obey without question. It’s in your nature, isn’t it? And you love to obey. Love to serve. It means you don’t have to think; don’t have to worry in the slightest. You can just let your mistress decide everything for you.”

“Stop it… I’m not a servant!”

“Lick my thigh,” she said.

Without a thought, Heidr obeyed. She tasted of oil and spice. Her fingers slid into his hair, holding him at her shapely legs and he just kept running his tongue along the soft skin. He closed his eyes, a quiet little moan escaping him. It felt… good. Right, even. Obeying as if on instinct. Yomela cooed with pleasure, and a little jolt of pride ran through him. He was making his mistress feel good…!

Wait, what was he saying?!

He pulled away, his head swimming. It had felt… good. Really good to just let her direct him. But he was… he shouldn’t… should he?

“Poor thing…” Yomela said, ruffling his hair. He nuzzled into her hand before he could stop himself. “You’re still hanging onto your old life, aren’t you?”

“There is no ‘old’ life!”

She cackled, “As if there is any chance you will ever leave here! And not from force, I may add. No… you will stay as my servant, and stay out of your own free will. Whatever will you have surrendered to me, of course.”

“I would rather die,” Heidr tried to snarl. Tried; it came out as more of a nervous breath.

Yomela’s smirk grew, as did the strength of her grip on his hair. She yanked him up, holding his head between her thighs and saying a single word. “Feast.”

Heidr dove forwards, his tongue dancing across the sorceress’ slick slit. A little purr of pleasure above him spurred him on, his trembling hands creeping up onto her thighs for support. By the time he’d realized what he’d started, his chin was already soaked with her juices; his mouth full of her beautiful taste. He flicked and poked and swirled with his tongue, listening for the loudest moans. Each and every pleasing sound that floated out of Yomela made him feel warm and happy, but most of all, proud. Proud of himself for bringing her such delight.

He whimpered as she pulled him away, tossing his head back.

“Oh? Not so defiant now, are we?” Yomela said. She turned and strutted her way back onto the dais, her plump arse moving hypnotically. She settled back in amongst her harem and curled her finger at Heidr. “Are you coming, slave?”

He trembled for a second, but still, he crawled across the cold stone and onto the soft furs. Yomela spread her legs wide, her wet cunt like a sparkling treasure. Heidr drew close, his tongue sliding past his lips before a barked command made him stop and whine.

“My, my… how eager you are,” She teased, “But there’s one little thing we have to take care of first.”

Two of her harem boys pulled back his hair, their touches as soft as his own skin, while another crawled toward him with a length of leather. Hanging from the front was the same smooth, milky white stone Yomela had made mere minutes ago.

“A reminder,” Yomela said, “Of what you could never be.”

Heidr swallowed, his cock twitching gently at the humiliation of it all. With a soft ‘click’ the choker was fixed in place around his neck, the stone weighing heavily. All the fear and vulnerability drained away, however, as Yomela’s hand brushed along his cheek. He nuzzled her fingers, their warmth reassuring. Kind, even. Like a soft kiss.

“Go ahead, slave. Continue.” She bade.

He lay between her thighs and eagerly gorged himself on her cunt. The warmth and softness of her legs wrapped around his head, pinning him in place while he licked and suckled. While his heart leapt with each groan of pleasure, each sharp cry from the sorceress’ mouth. Her hands dove into his hair. She shook around and above him. She screamed and cried out, calling him only be ‘slave’ and ‘slut’, but the words didn’t hurt; they only made him want to serve more. Finally, with a shrill scream that echoed around the room, her whole body convulsed. And then she dropped into the furs, her skin slick with sweat and her breath shallow.

Heidr pulled away from her cunt and her grip, looking up at the shaking sorceress. The other slaves seemed to draw a little closer, one even urging him upwards. Heidr hesitated. Someone pushed him, and he crawled up onto Yomela until his head was level with her full, ample breasts. Then her arms curled around him, pulling him into a soft embrace.

“Good boy.” Yomela kissed his forehead, and he trembled with delight. Slowly she stroked his head, her heartbeat in his ear as he closed his eyes and breathed softly. He felt safe, surrounded by her smell and the soft spice of the incense. Surrounded by soft cushions and softer flesh. His chest rose and fell in time with her own. Slowly… gently…

He drifted away into sleep, dreaming of serving his new mistress.

THE END